Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds

Sara Peters, Editor in Chief | 6/11/2012 | 29 comments

Sara Peters
Standardized tests are the bane of many K through 12 teachers' existences. Many teachers feel they spend less time teaching math, English, or history than they do teaching how to do well on a standardized test.

So would teachers welcome the introduction of software that could grade students' test-prep essays? Would they reject that software, claiming that while computers might be fine at grading multiple-choice tests, they can't grade something as complex as a writing sample? And how would they respond if they were told that while a computer can't necessarily grade an essay better than a trained educator can, a computer can do a darned good job of reading a trained educator's mind?

I confess that I cannot read a teacher's mind, so I'm very curious to know how K through 12 teachers greet the news that data scientists have recently created automated essay-grading algorithms that deliver scores that are shockingly similar to those issued by human educators. A three-man team of data analytics junkies was just awarded $60,000 for creating just such an algorithm as part of a competition sponsored by the William and Flora Hewlett Foundation and hosted by Kaggle (the site that "makes data science a sport"). According to the press release announcing the winners:

    Participants competed in the Automated Student Assessment Prize (ASAP) to develop software that could score students’ essays used in state standardized tests that had already been individually graded by educators. The winning team came closest to replicating how the tests were graded by the trained experts.

So the idea wasn't really to create an algorithm that can assess what score an essay should get, but to correctly guess what score an essay would get.

I can see how this could be a great thing as far as standardized testing goes. Typically each writing sample is graded by two teachers separately. If one teacher co-graded with the software, instead of a second teacher, then it would allow the school district to either employ half the number of teachers to grade the writing samples or give each teacher fewer essays to grade, so that they could spend more time on each one. And that would be a good thing.

Barbara Chow, education program director at the Hewlett Foundation, told the New York Times that teachers who grade essays on standardized tests spend an average of three minutes reading each essay. (If one of my terrifying high school English teachers had told my honors English class this, I think we all would have killed ourselves right then and there.)

Ultimately, the Hewlett Foundation's hope is that automated grading software will enable educators to include more writing components into standardized tests:

    This is important because standardized testing has had a significant impact on classroom practice. The goal is for students to acquire critical thinking and communication skills that writing requires -- all without the burden of added time and cost to the system.

    This innovative software also has great potential in classroom use. Its purpose is not to replace teachers, but to give them tools to be able to assign more writing in the classrooms. In today’s writing classes, students only write an average of three essays a semester. With up to forty students in each class, essays take too long to grade. This technology will allow teachers to assign more writing and give quicker feedback.

I can get behind the idea of coupling one human with one algorithm to grade essays for standardized tests. However, the idea that this software could be used in a class taught by only one teacher concerns me -- because it sounds like the only way this would save teachers' time is if the software did all the grading. And to me, this is a bad idea. After all, the written word is meant to be read by people, not by software. Despite the success of this software, I still don't think that it could it do a better job than my 12th grade English teacher at determining how well I supported my assertions about James Joyce's symbolic use of color in Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man.

Tell us, education CIOs. How would the educators in your school respond to increased use of automated student assessment technology in the classroom? Would it improve or injure education? Would it give teachers the opportunity to spend less time preparing their students to pass standardized tests and more time teaching them other things?

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PamR   Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds   6/19/2012 7:23:28 PM
Re: Quantity and Quality at the same scale ?
When I was in seventh grade, we had a very tired old teacher for social studies, my favorite subject, who based a chunk of our grade on daily handout sheets with four or five questions. Kids pretty quickly learned that the more they wrote, the better the grade. It was only a short while before they discovered they could write total nonsense--practice their English class writing lessons, for example--and the teacher never read them. He just looked at the volume of writing and scribbled a score.

I wonder how quickly essay writing would adapt to the algorithms required to score well--I realize this is prediction, not actually scoring but it's only a matter of time, isn't it? And course, this has nothing to do with actual teaching but just testing but how long will it be before technology replaces some teaching positions because, after all, an awful lot of time is devoted to testing. And how long before a teacher is judged by those tech-determined scores? They are already being judged by government-mandated assessments of scores. What's next? And when do we get back to actual teaching/learning?

 
Sara Peters   Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds   6/18/2012 11:10:05 AM
Re: Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds
@Henrisha  I couldn't agree more. A few words from a good teacher -- whether they're words of support of words of criticism -- can make an enormous difference. Some of the guidance from my teachers -- the little things scrawled in the margins in red pen. Some of these little comments are what ultimately led me to a career in writing. These types of personal notes aren't going to be provided by any software.
nasimson   Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds   6/18/2012 9:28:22 AM
Pretty awesome
Well, I guess there is no end to the mind-blowing innovative creations. High tech junkies like these will never fail to impress us by developing such high end applications. For me, this will definitely influence a lot of teachers and in turn the educational institutions. Not only will it save numerous times but also keep a standardized marking procedure, which most of the time, is overlooked. 
Henrisha   Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds   6/17/2012 9:12:27 AM
Re: Essay-Grading Software
Good observation, @angelfuego. I agree that this software can be of much use and will be able to aid the teacher a lot when correcting papers. It will save time, weed out any existing biases, and serve to improve the turnaround of these papers in the long run.
impactnow   Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds   6/17/2012 12:48:53 AM
Re: Quantity and Quality at the same scale ?

Broadway do you think that the software couldn't recognize style or account for style impacts? It sounds like it's pretty on par with human grading from the blog.

Broadway   Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds   6/14/2012 10:51:56 PM
Re: Quantity and Quality at the same scale ?
@vnewman, even in essays where the grader is looking mainly for "the facts," style counts. Like how and when to form new paragraphs with topic sentences at the lead, how to write an intro and a conclusion, and make logical arguments. Such style issues can make the difference between an A essay and a B essay, in my experience.
angelfuego   Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds   6/14/2012 8:07:07 PM
Essay Grading Software
It is an interesting concept. I have heard of such software to prepare students for standardized exams for math, reading comprehension, grammar, and spelling, but nothing specifically for essay grading. I am curious to know how efficient this software is. I wonder how the software can check the content typed, rather than functioning as a basic spell and grammar check. I wonder how accurately it can assess the essay on a more comprehensive level.
angelfuego   Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds   6/14/2012 8:01:44 PM
Essay-Grading Software
Interesting. It sounds like such a software would make correcting essays much faster and easier. Teachers will still be responsible for collecting the data, gathering it, organizing it, analyzing the data, and use the data to drive instruction. Each student will likely have a password. The teacher will have to prepare the data to present in conferences with parents, staff, and with each student. The software will likely identify each student's strengths and weaknesses.
impactnow   Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds   6/13/2012 5:31:20 PM
Software grading

I don't know that it would influence what they taught since they would still be teaching to the test, but it would reduce their time spent grading that hopefully they could use to create a better classroom experience. It would also create a completely objective grade since grading would be automated.

Henrisha   Essay-Grading Software Can Read Teachers' Minds   6/13/2012 2:21:55 AM
Re: Quantity and Quality at the same scale ?
Now this type of usage is more like it. It would definitely serve well for the teacher to have a tool to help them assess how they are grading papers and see if their biases are showing in how they're grading essays or not.
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